Saturday, December 11, 2004

You Make Me See

Tag poem, unedited, topic by Ragespiral  11.17.04

RageSpiral: tag to denise...topic: you make me see

DreamsbyDay: Crooked smiles  don't entice me anymore
DreamsbyDay: Slight of hand annoys me , like a cheap trick
DreamsbyDay: Grandious affectations, bore me
DreamsbyDay: Overbearing attitudes, make me sick
DreamsbyDay: .
DreamsbyDay: Once upon a time dreams of any girl
DreamsbyDay: usually revolve  around a prince
DreamsbyDay: mystical enchantment whirling you round...
DreamsbyDay: I grew up fast, and havent fallen since
DreamsbyDay: .
DreamsbyDay: Catty chatty  girlfriends wield their weapons
DreamsbyDay: flaunting  homes   and furs ,fast  cars & fancy rings
DreamsbyDay: I don't ask them to confess their sins
DreamsbyDay: I don't envy them their empty things
DreamsbyDay: .
DreamsbyDay: If you can make me see the world brand new
DreamsbyDay: or listen to my plans , and understand
DreamsbyDay: Perhaps  there's room to walk a while with you
DreamsbyDay: But do not drag me, only hold my hand...
DreamsbyDay: .
DreamsbyDay: Smile gently and don't overdue the chore
DreamsbyDay: there's nothing in the script that says you must
DreamsbyDay: . reveal your open hand and hide no more...
DreamsbyDay: all  that I ever want , I'll have , with trust.
DreamsbyDay: end


Tag Poem, unedited, topic by Bonitagringuita

DreamsbyDay: Thought the weather would hold out,
DreamsbyDay: frozen on the corner waiting,
DreamsbyDay: without the gloves and scarf I needed
DreamsbyDay: without you to warm me up
DreamsbyDay: last time you saw me it was spring
DreamsbyDay: the daffodils covered  the  side yards
DreamsbyDay: there used to be a see saw there , long ago,
DreamsbyDay: Why do I feel so old?
DreamsbyDay: Feelings are a funny thing,
DreamsbyDay: why can't I laugh any more?
DreamsbyDay: you laughed at the sight of those daffodils
DreamsbyDay: recalling that the lawn looked freckled
DreamsbyDay: you freckled in the sun and I thought it was sexy...
DreamsbyDay: you maintained, I wasn't your type
DreamsbyDay: I wrote to you several times, typed and stamped and sent...
DreamsbyDay: man , it's freezing here ,
DreamsbyDay: and the mailbox remains empty
DreamsbyDay: and my mind keeps wandering
DreamsbyDay: to warmer times.
DreamsbyDay: .
DreamsbyDay: .
DreamsbyDay: .end

Tuesday, December 7, 2004

No Offense

" Prefacing something obviously offensive
'No Offense' -
does NOT
make it,   or you,
any less offensive.